Okay,

for this text analyzing, I decided to try analyze my own writing from the secret life of pronouns website, which by the way might be fun considering I love writing

https://www.secretlifeofpronouns.com/exercise/TATintro/

and of course I will play by the rule; I will write anything that comes to my mind about that picture, and I will use my native language; Indonesian. Do not worry as I will also give the translation version so everyone could understand.

As expected since I wrote in Indonesian, the website could not determine my score, but here is the text

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Ini adalah cerita seorang bernama Nyonya Tina, beliau merupakan seorang ahli dalam meramu obat, keahlian beliau diakui oleh koleganya yang juga merupakan para ahli dalam bidang tersebut.

Namun, ada satu hal yang tidak diketahui oleh seluruh kolega di laboratorium di mana Nyonya Tina bekerja; beliau belajar itu semua bukan dari universitas ternama, melainkan beliau merupakan keturunan penyihir yang sangat ahli dalam membuat ramuan-ramuan penyembuh, racun, bahkan untuk membuat sebuah keajaiban.

Hari ini Nyonya Tina harus menjadi pengajar untuk kolega baru di laboratorium tempat di mana dia bekerja, seperti biasa sebelum berangkat bekerja Nyonya Tina harus mempersiapkan semuanya terlebih dahulu; baju laboratorium untuk bekerja, tongkat sihir untuk berjaga-jaga, dan juga asistennya yang merupakan laba-laba yang bisa dimasukkan ke dalam baju laboratorium, meramu obat adalah hal yang sulit dan seorang atau seekor asisten akan selalu bisa diandalkan.

Nyonya Tina cukup bersemangat hari ini, karena beliau mengetahui akhirnya ada yang bisa meneruskan apa yang beliau kerjakan; rekan kerja terbarunya juga merupakan seorang penyihir, usianya lebih muda, namanya adalah Bob.

Tidak perlu diajarkan terlalu banyak, Bob sudah memiliki keahlian dalam meracik ramuan, dirinya sangat bersemangat untuk belajar dan jadi murid Nyonya Tina. Nyonya Tina hanya berpesan "obat untuk manusia biasa memiliki formula yang berbeda, dan cukup sulit."

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the english translation (using google gemini):

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Mrs. Tina, a masterful potion-maker, was highly regarded by her colleagues, all experts in their own right.

But there was a secret no one at the lab knew: her skills didn't come from a prestigious university. Instead, she was a descendant of a powerful witch family, specializing in healing potions, poisons, and even miraculous concoctions.

Today, Mrs. Tina was tasked with training a new colleague. Before heading to work, as was her routine, she prepared her lab coat, her magic wand for emergencies, and her spider assistant, which she kept in her pocket. Potion-making is a difficult art, and an assistant, human or animal, is always a reliable partner.

Mrs. Tina was quite excited today because she knew she had finally found someone to carry on her work. Her new colleague, a younger man named Bob, was also a witch.

Bob already had a knack for making potions and was incredibly eager to learn from Mrs. Tina. Mrs. Tina's only piece of advice for him was, "potions for regular humans have different formulas and are quite difficult."

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Just by translation alone the word and characters count is the different, this is expected, I guess as someone who speaks many language but mostly Indonesian and English, I feel like english is a more expressive language for me, while Indonesian still not have enough expression, hence it is more lengthy. Is it because I use AI for the translation? Partly true, simple google translate won’t do the job well for context, but the AI translation are legit.